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All right.... As others have said, welcome to YWS! And also as others have said, I'm sorry, but this really doesn't fall under the category of 'poetry.' However, we are ...

You guys are all so pretty!!!

Hey there. Sorry It took me so long to reply again.... Anyway..... This stunned me as much as it did the first time. It was so perfect the first time ...

1. A Voice Like Chocolate Tell me again what stars are like. I smile, “Stars,” I whisper, softly as moonbeams glancing off my windowpane, “are like the feeling you have ...

To dream is to hope, to hope is to want to want is a feeling comma thats what it means The last two lines of this stanza sound sort of ...

I hate to just repeat what everyone else has said, but, well.... that was nothing short of amazing. I love the style you write with; short, simple, to the point, ...

Oh this is wonderful! I don't feel so alone any more! :D And yes... I do have another... many actually, but I'll just stick with one for now... Okay, so ...

Awww thank you.... I wouldn't mind at all... :oops: I feel special!

Hehe these are quite funny.... Sadly, I have an extremely long list..... Last year I was a freshman at my 500 student, small-town high school, where everyone knows everybody else, ...

*Rushes to give gold star* I loved this! The way you wrote it makes me see it so vividly somehow, and more than that, feel it. It's very easy for ...

Wow. I am absolutely amazed at how powerful your writing is. The only things I can think of to correct are punctuation. The beginnings of your sentences should be capitalized ...

I'm back!!!!! Any critiques are greatly appreciated, and I hope you will rip and tear away as you please! I'm wondering if the meaning is clear in this..... Leave me ...

Here we go! Commentary in bold... Enemies? I have none. Grudges? I don’t recall. I have no need to avenge There should be a comma here... or to “regain my ...

I no what you think 'no' = know Its gonna be another boring poem About how somebody has unspoken able beauty Or just to short of a skirt 'to' = ...

Shunned by everything in the light They stare at you in spite You run away from the people who just see a face In this line I would substitute the ...